Your gong fu has a lot of good and bad points, but I'd like to draw particular attention to problems in your footwork.
你的功夫优点和缺点并存,但我希望你能特别要注意你的步法。
One moment we were walking along the top of a hill and now we could see no more than about thirty metres ahead of us.
一时间我们还在山顶上行走,而现在30公尺开外的地方我们都看不清了。